The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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, many

people

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tend to purchase

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via online

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rather than going offline shopping. Some

people

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believe that

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can cause the physical stores and all

shop

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shut

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down in the future.

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, I totally disagree with

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statement, and I will examine my viewpoint in the following paragraphs before reaching a conclusion.

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with, it is undeniable that online shopping

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customers more

convinient

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convenient

.

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, there are some

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that consumers still want to buy at the physical stores,

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as

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, fruit, meat, etc. As they want to check and see the real one before making a purchase, and

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is what online shopping cannot do so.

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, some shops like groceries or big markets still need to operate in towns due to the demand of consumers. Another reason is that

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of shopping at home by ordering via one's laptop or smartphone is totally different from going to the department store or any shop. Generally,

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enjoy

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shopping since it gives them

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.

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, women are keen on trying new clothes at shops. On top of that, sometimes

shopper

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just

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the store

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store

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to do window shopping with friends.

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,

people

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could not buy

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experience

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through any e-commerce platform.

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, it might be true that some retailers may be closed, yet others will be continued to serve their customers' need

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sensible

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. In conclusion, it is widely known that the rise of

online

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transaction

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for shopping is growing.

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, due to the variety of consumer's

behavior

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, consumers will require to touch

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and to get the

experience

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of shopping.

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, some retailers will operation and remain in the future.