The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowaday

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Nowadays

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, many

people

tend to purchase

things

via online

channel

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rather than going offline shopping. Some

people

believe that

this

can cause the physical stores and all

shop

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shops

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shut

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down in the future.

However

, I totally disagree with

this

statement, and I will examine my viewpoint in the following paragraphs before reaching a conclusion.

To begin

with, it is undeniable that online shopping

make

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customers more

convinient

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convenient

.

Nevertheless

, there are some

things

that consumers still want to buy at the physical stores,

such

as

vegetable

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, fruit, meat, etc. As they want to check and see the real one before making a purchase, and

this

is what online shopping cannot do so.

Consequently

, some shops like groceries or big markets still need to operate in towns due to the demand of consumers. Another reason is that

experience

of shopping at home by ordering via one's laptop or smartphone is totally different from going to the department store or any shop. Generally,

people

enjoy

go

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shopping since it gives them

experience

.

For instance

, women are keen on trying new clothes at shops. On top of that, sometimes

shopper

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shoppers

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just

visit

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the store

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store

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to do window shopping with friends.

As a result

,

people

could not buy

this

experience

through any e-commerce platform.

Hence

, it might be true that some retailers may be closed, yet others will be continued to serve their customers' need

of

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sensible

things

. In conclusion, it is widely known that the rise of

online

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transaction

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for shopping is growing.

Nonetheless

, due to the variety of consumer's

behavior

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, consumers will require to touch

things

and to get the

experience

of shopping.

Therefore

, some retailers will operation and remain in the future.