Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is undeniable that tons of criminals continue to commit

crime

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after being punished.

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the reasons and solutions to deal with

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problem. There are several reasons why crimes tend to

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re-offend

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with, it might be hard for them to find a job because most

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companies

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the companies

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avoid employing a person who has

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, the manager often scares that people with

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will threaten the safety of their company.

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, people who

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been put in

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prison may have

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a lack

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of

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and

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pieces of knowledge

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that meet the job requirements

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as computer

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, or communication

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, prisoners can make friends together and continue to keep in touch after releasing from jails.

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they can gather and do bad things

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other or someone will hire them to do illegal acts like kidnapping. To solve

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, the government and community could do something to help them.

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of all, companies should give

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opportunities

to everyone equally,

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, people who was in prison can work and earn money.

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, if they have sufficient abilities, the employer is able to give them a chance.

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, the government can organise some training courses in jails or let them do some manual labour works

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, aircraft

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. To sum up, it is true that offends can commit

crime

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crimes

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again because they find it difficult to find an occupation and find it easier to do illegal things to make money.

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, the government and society should give them more chances by giving them jobs and opening training classes in prisons to help them gain more practical

skills

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and knowledge.