Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not in others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Some ideas about the investment of government to persuade students in
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specific
fields
which help to increase the efficiency of countries are becoming bold more than
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, plus other
fields
should not expect any
support
from states.
however
, there are both pros and cons about
this
issue, which will be discussed
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essay.
First
of all, I think the hugest advantage of
this
argument would be the quality of income so that the applicants who have passion about studying in
such
fields
but they have not any monetary
support
to pay the fees so they give up and choose other options that not interested in have a chance to represent themselves.
secondly
, it can be like an advertisement to put these
fields
in a prior stage and make them especial so most of
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should put their all efforts to get the best results and start
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competition with each other for a better position. One of the major plus points is the proficiency of people who work in a delicate position
for example
nuclear engineering. Turning to the other side of the argument which has its own disadvantages, one of the considerable drawbacks would be the demand of choosing these
fields
because of the services are given to it so other
fields
can be disappeared in
this
process. societies need every single occupation
thus
all of them have value separately. Another impediment is the lack of consideration to allocate money. in some cases,
for instance
, if
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put all fund on specific
fields
have not any to
support
other ones.
as a result
,
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society becomes
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sort of unipolar and of course it brings an irreparable consequence for it. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that states should have an exhaustive plan to
support
all
fields
of studies but consider some privileges for certain courses. in general, the disadvantages of
this
policy diminish the advantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic efficiency
  • allocate resources
  • job market
  • unemployment
  • underemployment
  • skill gap
  • critical sectors
  • financial incentives
  • societal needs
  • potential for resentment
  • undervalued
  • academic performance
  • overspecialization
  • diversity in skills
  • cultural development
  • holistic societal growth
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