There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: • describe what the problem with the changing rooms is • say what happened the last times you complained • explain what you want the manager to do.

Dear Sir or Maam,
This
letter is being written to complain to you about the awful condition of changing room in the sports club named Healthy and Wealthy Centre. I have been a member of your club since 2001. From
then
till now, no serious renovation has been done .
Firstly
locks are not working properly so
i
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extremely unsafe while changing clothes.
Secondly
, sinks are
also
smelling bad .
Moreover
, there is no large mirror in the room .
This
is not the
first
time I am complaining . In fact,
last
month I complained to management but no action has been taken yet. It seems like my words fall on deaf ears. I urge you to please look into
this
matter urgently and try to improve the condition because we already paid the annual membership fees . ,
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we have to cancel our registration from very
next
year. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, MANVIR KAUR.
Submitted by Manvir kaur bhatti on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • frequent user
  • specific issues
  • cleanliness
  • hygiene
  • broken facilities
  • lack of supplies
  • address the issue
  • response
  • emphasize
  • well-maintained
  • comfort
  • hygiene
  • politely
  • firmly
  • request
  • resolve
  • prompt resolution
  • discuss
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