Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, However, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In many country politicians try to increase the recession factors and they think
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is their most critical duty for their
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, many
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such
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as some specialists believe that
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in other aspects is important as
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economy
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. In my point of ,view recession progress is very important but it is not the only important driver for the evolution of a homey and
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other improvements are equally important.
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of all, the mental matters of society are very important for the
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of a nation. If in a rustic government successes to improve the
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while the psychological problems are increasing and the mental health does not improve,
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can not enjoy their life and welfare amenities.
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, Sustainable
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is not going to happen and in
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,term the
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is going to fall
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. Sustainable
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has three aspects which are social progress, economic evolution and environmental improvements the psychological and mental health is a factor of social progress.
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aspect of a country
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that I think is important as like as economical
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, is foreign relationships. Foreign relations means communication with other
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and nations which, affects every problem, challenge and matter that happen inside the country.
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, some
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focused on technology
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and increasing the wealth range of
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alone without any relation with other
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even their neighbours.
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, they used to grow for a while but for now not only can not reach their own goal but
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they must pay the additional cost to other
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to buy their needs because of many reasons like as sanctions. Due to these reasons, I think
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economy
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the economy
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is very critical for nations but the politicians and governments must focus on other fields
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as the mental health of society and effective relations with other governments and
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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