Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I think the issue about what is better to specialize in many

subjects

or choose the

one

is a controversial

one

. Each option has its own advantages and disadvantages. Some people prefer to specialize in

one

subject and know it very well.

However

, others prefer to extend their range of interests and specialize in many

subjects

but not in detail. ,Bellow I will give reasons to support my position. On the

one

side, learning something in detail brings many benefits.

First

of all, people gain more knowledge and experience in

this

area. So, after ,graduation they are well prepared for their

further

career in

this

field.

Second

of all, they do not spend their precious time on other

subjects

.

This

gives them the opportunity to focus on

one

subject. On the other side, people who specialize in many

subjects

have more options to choose from.

For example

, if a

person

does not make a decision about what he is going to do after graduation it is a very good chance for him to try many fields of study and make the right decision.

In addition

to

this

practical ,benefit a

person

has the opportunity to extend his range of interests, his communication skills and have better conceptions of things around.

Also

, a

person

has a better chance to choose what he really likes to do and make self-realization. To sum up, I think that every

person

should have a chance to choose. Does he want to specialize in

one

subject or he wants to take classes in many

subjects

.

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