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The Line graph depicts the amount of three spreads(
Margarine
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,Low fat&Reduced spread and
Butter
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) were consumed over 26
years
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 of period, which is from 1981 to 2017. Units measured in
Grams
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. Overall, it can be seen that
margarine
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 and
butter
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 consumption decreased over a given period of time, while, for low fat&Reduces spreads,it rose.
Initially
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 in 1991
butter
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 was the most popular spread, which is been replaced by
margarine
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 from 1991 to 2001, and
then
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 low-fat and reduced spreads became the most widely used spread in the final
years
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.
Initially
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, the uptake of
butter
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 began at approximately 140
grams
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 and peaked at 160
grams
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 in 1986.
Moreover
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,In the following
years
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, it was gradually reduced to 50
grams
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 in 2007.
Similarly
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, about 90
grams
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 of
margarine
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 was eaten in the
first
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 year it
also
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, reached a peak of 100
grams
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 and remains steady till 1996 since
then
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, there is a drop in intake as a consequence, it reached to 40
grams
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 in 2007
Secondly
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, the consumption of low fat and
butter
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 began at about 10
grams
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 in 1996,
then
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 increased significantly and reached around 90
grams
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 in 2001, slowly, the rate of consumption declined in final
years
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 to approximately 70
grams
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 in 2007.
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