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Some people think that learning literature is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the role of
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 curriculum. While I believe that
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 sometimes might contribute nothing to the learners’ main faculty,
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 subject still does wonders for many potential
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 in their learning journey. It is irrefutable that
literature
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 might act as a precursor for
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 in developing their communication skills which
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 of necessity in our life. Obviously,
literature
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 is an unlimited source of vocabulary, grammar structures
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 help
students
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 to pick up the appropriate words in contexts and write precise sentence formation. If these skills are gradually drilled at school, it will help
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 express and share their
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 of
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 in a more logical and understandable way.
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, teaching
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 at school can be an effective way to enhance
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 as well as
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 language of
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. While the redeeming feature of studying
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 is widely acknowledged, it is still a waste of time to some certain extent.Evidently, several science-related faculties
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 as chemistry, mathematics and physics do not require
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 insights,
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, learning
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 might make no contribution to the learning journey of
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 majoring in these fields.
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, some
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 whose main subjects area is business administration, so dealing with numbers is the key skill that they should deeply focus on rather than wasting time studying
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.
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, it is an absolute waste of time for
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 whose study field is irrelevant to
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. In conclusion, while there are reasonable culprits for
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 thinking, I strongly believe that
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 still plays a fundamental role in the academic curriculum of the
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