Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Nowadays, it is argued that the only solution to increase recycling from household waste is the duty
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government
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to regulate the
law
. Personally, I agree with
this
idea that the most effective method is making it a legal requirement.  Normally,
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daily life activities create
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amount of garbages
such
as plastic, glasses and
papers
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.
However
, only a few
people
realize that they should reuse some products in order to prevent them from destroying natural resources.
For example
, when
people
finish drinking water, they can easily recycle their leftovers by using them again and again.
This
method is not only an environmentally friendly process but
also
helps economic growth rapidly
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.
Nevertheless
, leftovers recycling becomes less popular among mankind.
In other words
, without
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legal enforcement, it is impossible to control
people
's
behavior
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.
Therefore
, it is necessary for federal authorities to regulate the
law
which
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in
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provoking awareness of household waste
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recycle
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Moreover
, when government take serious action in regulating the recycling
law
, it always
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out
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precious outcomes. Because
people
tend to abide by the
law
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the punishment or fine rather than realization of the environmental problems.
For instance
, many years ago in Thailand, governments used to
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for
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littering in public places and
people
who broke the
law
repeatedly had to be jailed.
As a result
, the pavements were very clean at that time.
Last
but not least, it is an effective way to cultivate environmental conservative
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among
people
not only in
this
generation
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but
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later ones. In conclusion, I strongly agree with using the
law
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household waste
recycle
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process.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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