Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, charging people for admission appears in certain

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. The positive and negative effects will be described in the following paragraphs. There are many advantages

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collecting the entrance fee. The collected money is used to redecorate and renovate the

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, the public will be attracted to the renovated

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and make more people come to the

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. More social attendance to them means more income and

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income will encourage the staff to bring new objects or new arts to the galleries and become the large education place for those interested in them.

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, the negative impact

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appears since some

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did not collect visitor charges. It causes society to blame the galleries that charge money from them for being selfish

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and unpleasant to visit.

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, some people

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suspect how their fees will be used and the worst situation is the museum organisations were suspected to be deceptive and corrupt companies. To tackle

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problem, some

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cannot allow the free cost to entry since they need the funds for their interesting design and

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objects. Due to

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problem, all

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must receive the admission fees and collect them with the total amount.

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method will help the population trust them and come to visit the galleries again. In conclusion, there are some arguments about the advantages and disadvantages of

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charging. In my perspective, the renovation

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beautiful buildings to get more social attraction and extend the education space outweighs the suspect views

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as the deception or corruption by the museum organisers.