Crime is becoming a serious concern. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime. While others feel that little action can be done to stop crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Crime

has been a serious problem since the time of

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. It has grown a lot, but gradually, even while several steps have been undertaken to bring it under control. With the increase in the global

crime

rate, various laws and orders have been imposed on the perpetrators, which have helped to curb illegal

activities

. No matter how strict the laws and orders are, they have failed to control the people who commit crimes.

Firstly

, in terms of actions that need to be taken to reduce criminal

activities

let us examine

famous

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9/11 act by terrorists on the

World

Trade Centre in New York, USA, where there were a series of hijacking of airlines followed by mass

killing

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which was heinous.

This

act brought global awareness and made nations tighten their border security and curtail

further

such

terrorist

activities

.

Similarly

, the

crime

rate in Chicago which was considered to be the

crime

capital of the

world

was brought under control by concerted affirmative police action in the

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mid sixties

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of the

last

century.

Hence

, it is clear that law and order does work when it is implemented with commitment.

On the other hand

, despite strict preventive measures governments have failed to hold criminals in check. The example of drug cartels around the

world

is a case in point. Governments have been unsuccessful in breaking the trade and distribution of addictive drug rackets in almost every city in the

world

. Even with

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in law and order criminals have always found a way to reach their goal.

This

shows that the foundation of judiciary needs to be strengthened with successful catching of culprits while cleaning up corruption in their own ranks which is keeping preventive measures from taking effect. In conclusion, a nation governed by a good constitution needs to condemn the acts undertaken by terrorists involved in various criminal

activities

should

also

try to have

a tightly secured borders

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a tightly secured border

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along with a fool-proof system

which

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helps in curbing the

crime

rate. Despite all these efforts, human tendencies for a quick and greedy gain will continue to manifest as crimes and societies can only hope to find newer ways to curtail

such

anti-social

activities

.