Governments should spend money on rails rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
Traffic
congestion has been exacerbated not only on
urban areas but Change preposition
in
also
on intercity highway routs
. While Correct your spelling
routes
this
makes the authorities think whether
allocating more budget on road infrastructure can alleviate Change preposition
about whether
traffic
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, I feel advocating the expenditure of money on Fix the agreement mistake
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railway
system is of paramount importance.
The Correct article usage
the railway
first
point to consider is that a large investment in road infrastructure can be particularly potent in facilitating commuters' daily travel and truck freight. In other words
, roadway widening, increasing lanes and asphalt paving, to name but a few, can make a huge difference in saving time and improving safety
of individuals and larger vehicles. Add an article
the safety
Although
this
justification
seems understandable, road expansion and improvement do not necessarily decrease lengthy tailback, the volume of freight Replace the word
just
traffic
or even traffic
gridlock, especially during rush hour. Since,
were governments to Remove the comma
apply
pay
more attention to roads than rails, people would be more encouraged to use their private cars and single-occupancy vehicles which in turn may cause more Wrong verb form
paying
traffic
and accidents.
Perhaps, a factor which
justifies prioritizing trains and setting aside money for ameliorating Correct pronoun usage
that
railway
system is preserving the environment. Nowadays, the earth has encountered serious environmental issues, including air pollution due to burning more fossil fuels compared to the past. Correct article usage
the railway
Hopefully
the greenhouse effect of Add a comma
,Hopefully
railway
transport is much smaller than cars, buses and trucks because most trains are electric, and they emit less carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Furthermore
, the less carbon dioxide people breathe, the less
respiratory or cardiovascular diseases they will experience in the long run. Equally important is the fact that rail travel and transport helps communities financially. Correct quantifier usage
fewer
That is
, Train's fare is economical and cost-effective, especially for shorter
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a shorter
the shorter
distance
.
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