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Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Different
 rules and preferences of universities make
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either excel in a particular subject or make them
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learn many topics.
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universities
 and colleges preparing
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 for only
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 subject aid them to focus and concentrate on the material which is required for their future career .
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 master the topic which would make them expert in their own field
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 it would be strenuous for them to the
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 by studying all the stuff which is even not beneficial for their job .
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, paying attention to
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relaxing
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therefore
students
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 do not get depressed and exhausted by the overload of multiple topics .
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 of things has its own benefits . It helps to expand knowledge and experience in many fields .
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A student
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 who is not sure about his /her dream job can get a golden opportunity to choose from
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 list of jobs by excelling in multiple subjects . Everything brings its own pragmatic and unpragmatic effects . I would prefer learning and becoming
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 in
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 subject rather than tasting every field . In
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multiple
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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