In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some parts of the world,

children

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This

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To begin

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demanding

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children

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in the past in relation to the positive aspects of trying hard. They would more easily achievattaine their goals throughout the period while they grew up. To illustrate, if

children

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They would be supported

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action they have not experienced

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parental assistance, which would help them to step out of fear.

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sell goods.

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means that the

parents

need to teach them to meet a variety of people good and teach /instruct them the techniques in selling goods

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so that the

children

can learn what would be the right thing to do. Ultimately, their fear will diminish

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parents

ought not to be too harsh or strict on their

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achieve /realise

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goals.

This

is because in some circumstances those younger ones may loathe

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specific tasks. To sum up, in my view, go back to the question it is true that

children

should

work

hard in order to achieve anything. There are obviously both

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and drawbacks to

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argument.

However

, the most significant feature is that the

parents

should support their child, as it is the key motivator

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for them to take the successful path.