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the population size and compares the birth and mortality rate of England and Wales for a period of 300 years starting from 1700.

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The line graph illustrates the information about the
population
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 size and compares the
birth
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 and mortality
rate
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 of England and Wales for a period of 300 years starting from 1700. Overall, it is evident that the
population
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 showed an upward trend, whereas
death
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 and
birth
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rates
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 showed a fluctuating trend. In the case of
population
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 size, it showed a dramatic escalation in the three centuries. The
population
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 rose from 2.5 million in 170o to 50 million in 2000, with a short period of stability from 1750 to 1800.  The
Death
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 and
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birth
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rates
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 followed a similar trend from 1700 to 1950. From 1700- 1750, an increase was seen in both these, with the
birth
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rate
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 rising from 30 to 40 per 1000
people
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, and the
death
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rate
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 increasing from approximately 27 to 37 per 1000
people
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. There was stability in both for the
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 50 years. After which there was a sharp fall with both
rates
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 reaching an all-time low of around 20 per thousand
people
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 by 1950. In between, from 1850 to 1900, the
birth
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 and
death
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rates
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 again showed a levelling off. During the
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 50 years, the
death
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rate
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 remained stable, but in the case of
birth
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rate
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, it dramatically rose to approximately 34 from 22 per 1000
people
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.
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