Many different countries have most shops and products as the same. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, globalisation has led to international trade across many
countries
. Similar goods and
products
are available all over the world via e-commerce websites and offline markets. In
this
essay, we will discuss both
positive
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and negative aspects of it.
To begin
with, international trade has increased exponentially in the
last
2 decades
due to
technological advancement and
brand
establishments. Big brands like Zara, Gucci and Prada have their presence across the globe. Their stores can be found in almost all the
countries
. Just like
this
brand's
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, there are many other
brand's
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brands
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which are available across the globe.
Due to
globalisation, it has become convenient for buyers to buy
products
of
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international brands in their own country.
Initially
, only people who could afford to travel to different
countries
were able to buy international
products
.
However
, now the scenario has changed and many of
this
brand
's
shops
are available in almost all the
countries
where people can buy them offline or they can order them online.
On the other hand
, there are a few negative aspects of having similar
shops
and
products
in different
countries
.
First,
there is no diversity in designs. Similar designs can be found in different
countries
.
Second,
countries
lack the authenticity of their local
products
as they are available or listed on platforms like
amazon
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which allows sellers to sell
products
internationally.
For example
, recently one of my colleagues
had
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visited Paris for her vacation.
she
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wanted to do some shopping in Paris
however
, she could not find any unique design which she
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buy as a souvenir. Those same
shops
and designs were
also
available in her home country with a minimal variation in price.
To sum up
, there are many benefits which surpass the negative aspects of having similar
shops
across the globe as
this
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a homelike feeling to someone who is planning to stay in a different country for months or years.
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Address both the positive and negative aspects of the topic in more detail to provide a balanced argument.
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