Many different countries have most shops and products as the same. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, globalisation has led to international trade across many
countries
. Similar goods and products
are available all over the world via e-commerce websites and offline markets. In this
essay, we will discuss both positive
and negative aspects of it.
Correct article usage
the positive
To begin
with, international trade has increased exponentially in the last
2 decades due to
technological advancement and brand
establishments. Big brands like Zara, Gucci and Prada have their presence across the globe. Their stores can be found in almost all the countries
. Just like this
brand's
, there are many other Change noun form
brand
brand's
which are available across the globe. Change noun form
brands
Due to
globalisation, it has become convenient for buyers to buy products
of
international brands in their own country. Change preposition
from
Initially
, only people who could afford to travel to different countries
were able to buy international products
. However
, now the scenario has changed and many of this
brand
's shops
are available in almost all the countries
where people can buy them offline or they can order them online.
On the other hand
, there are a few negative aspects of having similar shops
and products
in different countries
. First,
there is no diversity in designs. Similar designs can be found in different countries
. Second,
countries
lack the authenticity of their local products
as they are available or listed on platforms like amazon
which allows sellers to sell Capitalize word
Amazon
products
internationally. For example
, recently one of my colleagues had
visited Paris for her vacation. Unnecessary verb
apply
she
wanted to do some shopping in Paris Capitalize word
She
however
, she could not find any unique design which she can
buy as a souvenir. Those same Wrong verb form
could
shops
and designs were also
available in her home country with a minimal variation in price.
To sum up
, there are many benefits which surpass the negative aspects of having similar shops
across the globe as this
give
a homelike feeling to someone who is planning to stay in a different country for months or years.Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
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task response
Address both the positive and negative aspects of the topic in more detail to provide a balanced argument.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure a clearer flow between paragraphs to enhance coherence.
coherence and cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are well-presented.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?