Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In

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technological era, every

industrial

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has been

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and updated with high tech devices. While

,

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apply

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some

people

think that introducing

technology

in

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the study

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has good for the

child

development . Whereas, other

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of

people

think that hard copy material can

used

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in primary school. In

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paragraph,

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will discuss both phenomenons and come with my own opinion. To start with,

Technology

has put too many great full

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on

child

development.

Firstly

, creativity is one thing that every

people

compulsory to know about it. It should be developed from the beginning of school and

technologicl

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technological

gadgets play

main

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role to develop

this

.

For example

, there are so many games like puzzles,

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sudoku

, and so on, which can boost our mind and it can enhance creativity.

Secondly

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the child

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child

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children

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can quickly solve very difficult things. To continue, there are many applications which can learn every

lessons

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very smartly.

Lastly

, it will

also

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helpful

helpfull

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for future

panning

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planning

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. Every lecture

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full of pictures,

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videos

so, imagination can improve when they study on the internet. On the other side, some

people

think fully opposite side of it and they think that hard copy material is

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way to learn.

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,

child

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the child

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can not

diverted

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their mind

on

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other

thing

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and they focus on one thing only.

For example

, parents give permission to

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their

child

to use mobile for study

purpose

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but they use it for other things like

play

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games,

watch

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vedios

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videos

etc.

Secondly

, Histological and mythological books are not available on

internet

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the internet

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and these books are very important for children which can give and learn about culture and evolution.

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conclusion,

technology

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is introduce

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introduce

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in every field sector either it is industrial or

non industrial

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. It

become

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very helpful when any disaster can

happened

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and at that time,

studing

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studying

of

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the

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child

should continue. Government should

also

introduced

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technology

in rural area schools.

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Therefor

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, students can check their abilities.