Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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technological era, every

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will discuss both phenomenons and come with my own opinion. To start with,

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development.

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compulsory to know about it. It should be developed from the beginning of school and

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can quickly solve very difficult things. To continue, there are many applications which can learn every

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very smartly.

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full of pictures,

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so, imagination can improve when they study on the internet. On the other side, some

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think fully opposite side of it and they think that hard copy material is

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way to learn.

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can not

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and they focus on one thing only.

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to use mobile for study

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but they use it for other things like

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games,

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and these books are very important for children which can give and learn about culture and evolution.

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conclusion,

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in every field sector either it is industrial or

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very helpful when any disaster can

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and at that time,

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should continue. Government should

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in rural area schools.

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, students can check their abilities.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

316 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

online reading materials
printed materials
advantages
disadvantages
technology
convenience
interactivity
accessibility
visual appeal
physical books
parental guidance
digital skills
screen time
learning experience
personal preference
comprehension
critical thinking
creativity
word recognition
grammar
vocabulary development
reading habits

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