Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Global training is crucial for personal and integral development.
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many others still argue the importance of integral learning. I partially agree with these statements, and from my perspective, both have to be taken into account. In Linking Words
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essay, I explain both sides in detail.
To start with, education and societies have constantly changed because human thoughts, feelings and insights are dynamic, Linking Words
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have to concentrate on a specific field where they show the highest performance. Use synonyms
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, there is a well-known (a) global exam called 'Pisa' that evaluates general and specific Linking Words
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nonetheless
, since 2016, the majority of the Linking Words
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have been positioned into the low-medium categories without outstanding results.
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, traditional educators still argue the necessity to establish ways where overarching topics must be taught, and many other Linking Words
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reason, many schools have developed and integrated the majority of the knowledge by doing complete curriculums. Linking Words
For example
, in Colombia, The Government set a rule in which all national schools must change their pensum in order to teach programming code, carpentry and social work.
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To sum up
, both sides should be carefully evaluated in order to improve not only personal Linking Words
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integral, general and cultural performances. Linking Words
Besides
, cutting-edge technologies have modified the ways of teaching and learning and all of these should be leveraged.Linking Words
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