Newspapers will remain the main source of news in the future and the Internet will not have any affect. Do you agree or disagree?

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rapidly improving

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usage, some believe that the

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are going to be the main source of news at any time. I believe that it will not take so far

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when companies will stop wasting paper for

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and trustworthy

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sources fully replace them. Looking around we can see that newspaper

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are becoming more frequent,

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new technology like E-ink display made

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process more comfortable for us.

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distributing system, which brought

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in local newspaper

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Bukhara just a decade ago they were at any corner and people were interested in everyday progress so there was a need for

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people found online reading more convenient for its enormous data and instant access possibility anytime and anywhere, so

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part of printing houses closed.

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has been descended.

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daily evolving technological era we are creating modernized life, which could bring more comfort to our lives. One

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example of that could be recently improving E-ink display integration to our smartphones, which has been brought to life with Yota company.

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process harmless to our vision and gave us

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of natural reading like on printed paper. So, it could make a possibility of replacement

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by the

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near few decades. As the above makes clear, from these days’ day by day decreasing

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and devising new electronics for better reading comfort could change the situation with

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could be replaced by

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resources.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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287 words

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Newspapers will remain the main source of news in the future and the Internet will not have any affect. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that mobile phones and other electronic devices have no place in the classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?