In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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several
countries becoming aware of
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the history
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of the home place is getting noticeably popular among
people
.
This
trend has got its own
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causes
courses
and in
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I am going to point out some of them and to give an idea about what can be done with being able to find out and spread information
buildings
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about buildings
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and houses that
people
want to know. To start with, I have to admit that
this
idea is
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completely
personal and many
people
might
be disagree
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with
this
notion. As I noticed, having interest for
finging
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finding
out the
history
of house or building is mainly
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occurring
in Europ, America, UK or in Canada.
However
, when I looked at developing countries or countries which is experiencing war or difficult political situations have nothing in common with being interested in knowing
building’s
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background. As an
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I can present my own country, Uzbekistan. Here
majority
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the majority
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of
population
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the population
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are trying to survive
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rather
than being interested in
cultural
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the cultural
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or historical background of
place
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the place
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.
Futher
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Further
more,
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the question
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comes to what
people
should do in order to find or search for needed information I have an idea which might be turned into a good
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business
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plan.
However
, it is
easily
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said than being done. As we all know, nowadays, we have a lot of
custemer
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customer
service businesses. I think with the help of some experts like
archiologists
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archaeologists
,
chrnologists
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chronologists
technologists
,
historicans
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historians
historical
and definitely project managers we will be able to help persons or families to have precise data about
about
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history
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the history
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of
house
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houses
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and
building
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buildings
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. Because
of
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many
people
do not have enough skills and
knowlage
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knowledge
to do
this
job by themselves ,
this
type
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sistematic
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systematic
service would benefit both scholars and
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customers
equally. In
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conclusion
, as said earlier
curiocsty
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curiosity
like being
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interested
in the background of
building
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a building
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or house is a state of mind which has its own value
aethetic
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aesthetic
ambitions. But if a mind is concerned about basic human needs in order to live there is no place
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to seek your own truth through your
history
.
However
, ways to reserarch and investigate is not very simple though it can be reached if
first
stapes
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steps
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are taken.
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