You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting

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Dear

Neighbbours

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Neighbours

, I am writing

this

letter to bring

everyone

's attention to the

car

parking issues. Though we are ten families in the building and ten parking slots are available, many times either one of us has

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space to park the

car

from

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for

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past

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the past

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apply

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couple of weeks. I hope

everyone

is aware of the fact that

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one

car

space per family is allowed yet

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am not able to park it in my

alotted

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allotted

place because I come home

midnight

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and someone's

car

has been parked there already. I recommend

to give

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parking

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the parking

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number as per our house number so that

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nobody

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no body

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nobody

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has any difficulty to remind their place number and

guest

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the guest

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car

or extra

car

can be parked in the paid

car

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I would like

everyone

to gather

this

weekend at your convenient time and discuss

this

problem once and for all so that in

futute

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future

everyone

has

thier

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their

own parking area without any hassle. I hope to hear from all of you soon. Thank you. Yours faithfully,

Brijal

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Bridal

Brinjal

Desai

Submitted by brijal_desai on Wed Nov 03 2021

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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