1. Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. In your letter, you should: -describe the gift -tell how it will be delivered -explain why you chose it.

Dear Jenny, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am glad to hear that you've just moved
in
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your new house near
Pharana
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Parana
river, the most beautiful river in the city. Anyway, I am thrilled to tell you that I have already bought a gift for you.
Last
week, I went
China
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to China
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Town to buy an ancient picture. While I was choosing the picture, I came across the nice but rare cups from Nanjing. I believe that
these cup
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this cup
these cups
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will be
best
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the best
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suit
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for your dining table. It
made
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from glasses and painted with
colorful
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flowers. As these cups are fragile, I will drop them off
to
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at
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your house by myself. Just let me know when you are available
next
week. I will be the delivery girl for one day.
Moreover
, because I
remebered
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remembered
that you told me that you love ancient items and would like to have some cups,
therefore
I think these things are what you're looking for.
Last
but not least, it would be great if we could arrange
the
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meeting to catch up together. I can't wait to
hearing
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from you. Bests, Joy
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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