1. Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. In your letter, you should: -describe the gift -tell how it will be delivered -explain why you chose it.

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Dear Jenny, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. I am glad to hear that you've just moved

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into

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your new house near

Pharana

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Parana

river, the most beautiful river in the city. Anyway, I am thrilled to tell you that I have already bought a gift for you.

Last

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week, I went

China

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to China

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Town to buy an ancient picture. While I was choosing the picture, I came across the nice but rare cups from Nanjing. I believe that

these cup

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this cup

these cups

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will be

best

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the best

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suit

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for your dining table. It

made

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is made

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from glasses and painted with

colorful

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colourful

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flowers. As these cups are fragile, I will drop them off

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your house by myself. Just let me know when you are available

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week. I will be the delivery girl for one day.

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, because I

remebered

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remembered

that you told me that you love ancient items and would like to have some cups,

therefore

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I think these things are what you're looking for.

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but not least, it would be great if we could arrange

the

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meeting to catch up together. I can't wait to

hearing

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hear

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from you. Bests, Joy

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

188 words

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