Some people say that government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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It has been argued that the state should pay attention to environmental deterioration as well as accommodation related issues, in order to prevent illness and disease. I totally agree with the aforesaid notion. In
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paragraph, how it would be feasible for the government with the support of levy paid by the community and in the
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paragraph, the needfulness of huge infrastructure and a large number of efforts which are only within the reach of government fundings. To commence with, the
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paid by citizens of a nation are crucially significant and
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collective amount which directly goes into the government's bank account should be utilised for
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's benefit.
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, almost every nation collects legal
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from their citizens
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as property tax, water fine, housing contribution, business tax and
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on the purchase of gold and allied elements. So, it is a moral responsibility of a country to look after the basic necessities
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as a proper and livable environment along with housing facilities, especially for the
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of the lower economic groups.
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, in India, the city called 'Chandigarh' is the most well-organised city which is planned and monitored by authorities as far as environmental
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and dwellings are concerned.
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, the population in Chandigarh are more healthy and living in a spacious and clean atmosphere than the rest of the places.
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, to control
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from various modalities and to provide decent living place needs extravagant resources, which are within a reach of any national fundings and it is not possible for a single individual or a group of
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. To make it clear, I would like to exemplify that, air
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can be controlled by applying stringent rules, to
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water
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can be controlled by providing excellent sewage control channels,
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noise disturbances can be minimized by no horn policies or setting appropriate regulations, after that farming which is the largest industry providing food could be supported with infrastructure, knowledge and subsidies to farmers.
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, the slum areas could be converted into neat and clean apartments with basic amenities like electricity and water. All these things can be only done by democracy as it requires huge money. In conclusion, a country should be responsible for providing a clean atmosphere and a healthy living place to their citizens. In my opinion, I believe that it is absolutely within the capacity of a nation and the
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paid by
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should be justified by giving them facilities.
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