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Band 4.5

You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. In the letter: • explain why you are writing • explain why you have decided to leave the company • tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment.

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Dear sir, I have been working in Luberef Jeddah since the year 2019. I am writing
this
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 letter to inform you that I am going to discontinue my work
from
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 the end of next month.
This
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 is thirty days prior notice for my resignation as I have accepted the job in Canada as a Human Resources manager.
This
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 is my dream destination, so I am requesting you
to
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release me from my duties as per the agreement. I would like to confirm that I do not have any concerns about my current position and my sole reason for resignation is to endeavour my career in my home country. So that, I can
also
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 spend time with family. I am thankful to you and my colleagues
to be
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for being
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 supportive in my professional journey in
this
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 company. I
get
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have had
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 so many opportunities and recognition during my working span. I would like to give you special thanks for
recognition
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of
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my abilities and
allowed
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 me to perform my job duties to the fullest. Yours faithfully, Harpreet Sangha
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task respond
Ensure that the letter addresses all the required points in the prompt, including reasons for leaving the company and future plans.
coherence cohesion
Organize the ideas in a more coherent manner, and use appropriate linking words to improve the overall flow and structure of the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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