Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?

One of the most controversial issues which threats our environment is global warming. It means, increasing temperature due to air pollution causes climate
changing
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that
is became
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our planet warmer.
Firstly
, with
growth
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the growth
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of population in
recent
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century, a large number of
trees
has been cut for building new towns and cities. In
this
case,
governments
should present agriculture plans to increase more planting and parliaments should support laws to prevent cutting
trees
.
Secondly
, fossil
fuel
is
burning
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to operate factories, power stations and cars which should be less used by developing public transportation.
Thirdly
, electronic devices like computers, TV and lights are used too much electricity which rise temperature that should
be replace
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with renewable energy resources.
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any creature who
live
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on earth,
human
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the human
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being is living on it and have to keep the environment in a good condition. Unfortunately, we cut down
trees
without any planting project due to growth of population, or irregularly consumption of fossil
fuel
particular in factories or power stations and cars. The other reason which could be mentioned about global warming is using electricity severely.
For instance
, we all have computers and TV in our offices or homes and of
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there are a huge number of lights
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always on. In
this
regard,
governments
can help in several ways. They can observe cutting
trees
and limit it and force the wood factories to plant
instead
of those or support planting projects in associate students to grow numbers of
trees
. The other one was fossil
fuel
that either causes
to
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global warming or air pollution.
Governments
can replace it
by
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renewable energy resources like wind and solar energy which are much cheaper and available
in
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almost everywhere on
planet
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the planet
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. These clean fuels achieve
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and are friend with
environment
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the environment
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.
Finally
, with developing public transport including underway, bus or train, we can encourage people to use them that causes use fewer personal cars. So we can say that lack of
tree
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and using too much electricity which is produced by fossil
fuel
are the main reasons
of
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global warming and
climate
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climate-changing
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changing
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.
Governments
should use laws and projects
in addition
to renewable clean energies to improve
this
issue. Everyone should try to solve the problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Climate change
  • Earth's atmosphere
  • Carbon dioxide
  • Methane
  • Nitrous oxide
  • Emissions
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy efficiency
  • Afforestation
  • Carbon footprint
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