You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival you found that your luggage was lost. You did not receive your luggage until the last day of your holiday. Write to the airline, complaining about this situation saying why it caused you problems seeking suitable compensation

#plane #holiday #city #luggage #airline #situation #compensation

Dear Sir or Madam, I have been a satisfied customer for several years, but I am writing

this

letter regarding my

suitcase

which was lost while travelling on your airline, during the arrival of flight A202 in Paris on 15th Oct 2021. I boarded

this

plane on 14th Oct 2021 from Delhi with my black

suitcase

with important documents. In my

suitcase

, there was an original ticket for the local spring festival, for which I had come to Paris to spend my holiday. Even at

Correct article usage

the,airport

show examples

airport

Add an article

an airport

the airport

show examples

I enquired about my lost belonging at

local

Add an article

the local

show examples

help desk of airlines, but after 2 hours of

extensive

Add an article

an extensive

show examples

search,

service

Correct article usage

the service

show examples

team could not find anything. Keeping in view that

festival

Correct article usage

the festival

show examples

was starting from

Correct article usage

the next

show examples

day of arrival, there was no option left rather than buying new tickets at

premium

Add an article

a premium

show examples

price so that my holiday could not get ruined. Though

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

during

Change preposition

show examples

last

Correct article usage

the last

show examples

day of my holiday, I got a phone call that my

suitcase

had been found which I collected during the day of my return flight at

airport

Add an article

the airport

show examples

, but I had to spend $ 1000

for

Change preposition

show examples

getting the new festival ticket. I

therefore

Add the comma(s)

,therefore

show examples

, request you to refund the monetary loss which I faced due to fault of your company's service in Paris. I am looking forward to receiving a refund. Best Regards, Yadveer Singh

Submitted by Pooja Dhindsa on Thu Nov 04 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

220 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that only governments have the power to solve environmental problems that are posing serious threats to today’s world. However, I think that protecting the earth is the responsibility of both governments and individuals.
6
band
According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourist in the 1960s and 70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture. Why do you think this happen? How was tourism different in the past?
Nowadays, our lives are very developed so there are more people who travel to a new place on holiday. However, in contrast with tourist in the 1960s and 70s, they fly straight to their holiday resort and almost choose to reside there for the length of their trip then return home with no experience of the local culture. The following essay will show you why this happened and how tourism was different in the past.
5
band
me believe that it is the reponsibility of the people to care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of environment. discuss both views and state your opinion.
Now days, most of the people are involving themselves to take care of the environment.
4.5
band
In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?
In our modern life, the majority of individuals in several nations are researching their family origins. There are several reasons why this direction is happening. From my point of view, there are some positive and negative effects on humans, particularly adolescents and I believe it is a negative movement.
<4
band
With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?
The given chart shows the total number of minutes of telephone call in the uk form 1995 to 2002.The information is given on base of three modes of calling 1)Local call by fix line,(2) National and international call by fix line & (3)Mobile calls.

You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival you found that your luggage was lost. You did not receive your luggage until the last day of your holiday. Write to the airline, complaining about this situation saying why it caused you problems seeking suitable compensation

Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourist in the 1960s and 70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture. Why do you think this happen? How was tourism different in the past?

me believe that it is the reponsibility of the people to care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of environment. discuss both views and state your opinion.

In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?