You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival you found that your luggage was lost. You did not receive your luggage until the last day of your holiday. Write to the airline, complaining about this situation saying why it caused you problems seeking suitable compensation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I have been a satisfied customer for several years, but I am writing

this

letter regarding my

suitcase

which was lost while travelling on your airline, during the arrival of flight A202 in Paris on 15th Oct 2021. I boarded

this

plane on 14th Oct 2021 from Delhi with my black

suitcase

with important documents. In my

suitcase

, there was an original ticket for the local spring festival, for which I had come to Paris to spend my holiday. Even at

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airport

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an airport

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I enquired about my lost belonging at

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help desk of airlines, but after 2 hours of

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search,

service

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team could not find anything. Keeping in view that

festival

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was starting from

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day of arrival, there was no option left rather than buying new tickets at

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price so that my holiday could not get ruined. Though

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last

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day of my holiday, I got a phone call that my

suitcase

had been found which I collected during the day of my return flight at

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, but I had to spend $ 1000

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getting the new festival ticket. I

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, request you to refund the monetary loss which I faced due to fault of your company's service in Paris. I am looking forward to receiving a refund. Best Regards, Yadveer Singh

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

220 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

dissatisfaction
luggage handling
emotional stress
essential items
financial strain
replacement items
compensation
refund
monetary compensation
inconvenience
suitable solution
customer service
reimbursement
troubling experience
resolve

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