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Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree?

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Communication through social media is becoming more short and basic year by year. So, it is argued that it will cause
grammar
 and spelling rules to disappear. In my opinion,
this
 is not going to happen because official
documents
 require correct grammatical use and online services will check
people
’s writing.
Firstly
, all laws and contracts should be written without any
mistakes
 to ensure they are understandable for everyone. If
people
 stop writing them properly, there will be chaos and misunderstanding in the whole world due to punctuation and spelling
mistakes
. Companies, political, and social workers will not be able to fully understand the meaning of the
documents
.
Therefore
,
grammar
 will be always needed to make them convenient to read.
For example
, in the modern
world
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 all companies and politicians check their
documents
 for writing
mistakes
.
Secondly
, with the development of online checking
services
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people
 make
less
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grammar
mistakes
. Those services are becoming more and more precise because of the work of the programmers and linguists that modernize them every day. So, in the
future
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 they are going to correct all grammatical and spelling errors, which
people
 make
,
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 while writing. Even now, they do successful corrections and help
people
 to evaluate their writing
skill
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 and make fewer
mistakes
. T9, Grammarly, and Goggle assistant are becoming more and more popular these days and a lot of students use them to increase their essay
score
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. In conclusion,
grammar
 rules will not disappear because they are extremely important in minimizing potential misreading in official
documents
 and in the future
people
 are going to make fewer errors with the help of AI assistants.
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