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Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree?

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Communication through social media is becoming more short and basic year by year. So, it is argued that it will cause
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 and spelling rules to disappear. In my opinion,
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 is not going to happen because official
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 require correct grammatical use and online services will check
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’s writing.
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, all laws and contracts should be written without any
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 to ensure they are understandable for everyone. If
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 stop writing them properly, there will be chaos and misunderstanding in the whole world due to punctuation and spelling
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. Companies, political, and social workers will not be able to fully understand the meaning of the
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.
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,
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 will be always needed to make them convenient to read.
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, in the modern
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 all companies and politicians check their
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 for writing
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, with the development of online checking
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 make
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. Those services are becoming more and more precise because of the work of the programmers and linguists that modernize them every day. So, in the
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 they are going to correct all grammatical and spelling errors, which
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 while writing. Even now, they do successful corrections and help
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 to evaluate their writing
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 and make fewer
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. T9, Grammarly, and Goggle assistant are becoming more and more popular these days and a lot of students use them to increase their essay
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. In conclusion,
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 rules will not disappear because they are extremely important in minimizing potential misreading in official
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 and in the future
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 are going to make fewer errors with the help of AI assistants.
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