You have a friend who lives in a ity abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/ her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the pastfew years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

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Dear Susan, It seems like ages we haven't met each other and time indeed flies quickly. I am very sorry that I had not been in touch with you as I had been terribly busy. I hope

this

letter finds you in good health. I am writing

this

letter to get your assistant to gather some information and contact the relevant institution for my

further

studies in your country. I have studied for my post-graduate degree here which was the specialization in pharmacology. As you know, there is so much competition in the modern world and I do need to have an international degree as well to be in line with these cultures. That's why I decided to attend a master course at an appropriate university or institution in your country. I would be more appreciative in case you can give me a favour for selecting a great one that perfectly suits me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Happy to get the wonderful news soon. Yours sincerely, Honey Linn

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

170 words

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