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the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 summaries the information by slelecting and reporting the main feaures, and make comparisons where relevant.

the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 summaries the information by slelecting and reporting the main feaures, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the relationship between
percentage
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the percentage
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 of ownership of electrical apparatuses including washing
machine
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machines
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,
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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 and vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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 against the duration
time
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of time
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that
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spent
for
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apply
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doing chores in
individual
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the individual
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country
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countries
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since
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from
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 1920 to 2019. In 1920,
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people spent around 50 hours per week
to do
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doing
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the
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household task because
of
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that year did not have widespread
of
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electrical equipment to help people
saving
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time
. After that, the
owner ship
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ownership
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 of electrical
appliance
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appliances
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 dramatically
increases
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increased
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 in 1980 which
affect
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affected
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to
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the number of hours of chores per week was sharply reduced to 15 hours in that
time
 and rather stable until 2019.
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In conclusion
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, in my
opinion
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the
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electrical appliances is very important for everyone because
it
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they
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 can reduce the
time
 that
waste
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is waste
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for
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apply
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doing
the
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household task per week. Obviously seen from
that
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 data in
this
 report
that
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can confirm my perspective and inform everyone to know the benefit of equipment which can help you to do some chores.
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