The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
As can be observed, from the diagrams there is an upward trend in reading journal articles by
PhD
students
weekly. It amounted to a significant majority, 80%. There are more than 12 printed sources
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read by
this
group at an Australian University.
However
, only a small minority of young academics
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from 1 to 5 printed sources.
Nevertheless
, junior lecturers at the same University read fewer
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, which is numbered 5% less than
PhD
students
and reach around 9 per week.
Moreover
, all
students
spend less time reading
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journal articles. The sum is just a bit more than half of the total percentage and the number of publications is around three per week. There is approximately half of the total amount of
PhD
and all
students
are reading from 6 to 11 printed reports every week.
To sum up
, there is a high interest in reading articles at the Australian University for
PhD
students
and junior lecturers.
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