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Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#companies #sport #events #products #people #impact #sports
Today it is
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quiet
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 common for major
traiding
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trading
training
 companies to advertise their products during sports occasions.
However
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 some people claim that
this
 trend is
undeirable
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undesirable
undeniable
 and has
unwanted
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 influence on sports and
thus
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 undesirable. In my opinion, I believe it is
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quiet
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 benign and fruitful to use
sport
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 events to promote unharmful goods and produce.
Sport
 is
extremly
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extremely
 popular these days
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 and attracting millions of attendees , either in person or via the television, and recently, on the computer's or tables' screen ,
thus
 many businesses take the opportunity to show their products to a large number of people who are considered
a predicted consumers
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.
For instance
 , many
work out
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equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
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,
such
 as
traid
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trade
 mails, and bicycles,are promoted by
sport
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 celebrities, and some football
playrs
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players
 might hold the name of an airline company or an energy drink on their T-shirts.
Nevertheless
, I do not think
this
 way of advertising might bring about any undesirable effects on the
sport
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itself
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it self
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 as long as these
adevertisements
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advertisements
 are not supporting, or promoting
to
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any harmful materials
such
 as tobacco cigarettes and
acoholic
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alcoholic
 drinks.
Moreover
, some international firms might be supporting humanitarian organizations
such
 as the Red Cross and Doctors Without Borders, and they are devoting a considerable sum of money to fund the aiding campaigns for the
poors
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poor
 worldwide.
For example
, a renowned soft drink company has a contract with a basketball celebrity including a promotion to its product during games for three consecutive years , while 20% of the revenue will go to a local cancer
center
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. To conclude, I
dont
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don't
 see any remarkable negativities if capital companies promoted their product during sports events,
in
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 the contrary, it might be used for the good and to support people
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 need .
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