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Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?

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Many factors are part of the
country
 economy, one of these factors is tourism.
This
 activity is one of the greatest economical activities that
helps
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 the
country
's
incomes
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income
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. Tourism always brings benefits for society and individuals, because
this
 type of industry demands a big quantity of services
such
 as transportation, accommodation, food, goods consumption, services.
Therefore
, it helps to develop other types of working activities around them. Many people can work even though a particular person does not have a profession or is a specialist, that person can start
in
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 a low level and by obtaining experience, could become an expert. Nowadays, it is common that people not only look for beach-destination vacations, but visitors
also
 want to live well-experienced travel.
That is
 the reason why many sites or places that offer
this
 kind of experience are growing so fast,
for example
, glamping travels.
That is
 a mix between camping in a beautiful landscape and luxury services,
such
 as having a bed and an individual shower; without suffering the mosquito's bites. Tourism not only helps with economical incomes
,
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 but
also
 to spread the word of the
country
's attractions for others to visit. These recommendations help to increase the number of people who want to experience the same trip. The continuous travellers' visits ensure jobs for the community and benefit everybody. In conclusion, it is an important activity to develop in any
country
 and represents good incomes,
furthermore
, it gives information about the specific place or
country
.
Moreover
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 we can see a transformation in the actual travels people’s needs and how the industry is transforming. The good news is that
this
 sector will never end and will ensure jobs.
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