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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food Do you agree or disagree?

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There's a widely common problem nowadays
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 related to overeating junk
food
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 and leads to some health issues. It is argued that government has to react and increase a tax on
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 type of meal.
This
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 essay will agree with
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 statement and support some strong arguments and examples.
Firstly
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, consumption fast
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such
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 as hamburgers, french fries, sweet drinks usually don't contain enough nutrition, vitamins and minerals and give people an enormous amount of sugar, salt and fat exceeding their daily need.
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, lack of essential elements might lead to several critical conditions and diseases as diabetes, hypertension, anaemia, etc. A clinical trial based on Cambridge University in 2015 found a direct correlation between an unhealthy diet and the frequency of diagnosed heart attacks. Eventually, the authority should pay attention to
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 evidence and prevent
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 issues by raising taxes on fast meals, and,
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, promoting a healthy lifestyle using TV, the Internet and other advertisements. Nowadays fast
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 cafes are increasing in popularity among students due to their considerably cheap prices and availability almost everywhere.
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, the McDonalds cafe is represented probably in each big town of any country and, not to mention, taking dinner there is much cheaper than going to some restaurant.
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, a great deal of youngsters every day spends money on greasy products
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 of taking in enough amount of vegetables, fruits and other valuable foodstuffs. In conclusion, without the government
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 problem can not be solved and increasing the tax on junk
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 will reduce its consumption, and predictably the health issues.
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, it's just one of the approaches and power agencies have to use the diversity actions, including raising people's awareness.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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