Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

It becomes increasingly common these days to do online shopping , and many goods

such

as clothes , home appliances , and books are being purchased using specialized applications on the internet.

However

,

although

this

trend has some disadvantages, I believe it brings about more advantages. On one hand, some people claim that online trading has the drawback of being unsecured and unsafe in terms of the possibility of being a scam or

to expose

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the buyer to

money

theft .

For example

, many clothes are discovered upon delivery to be of

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bad quality and that they do not match the displayed ones on the advertising website.

Moreover

, other people might feel discomfortable buying something without

cheking

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checking

it out physically ,or without fitting it on, as

it

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is the case when buying a pair of shoes online .

Finally

, products bought

this

way might be exposed to damage on

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, and some companies do not offer any insurance for

such

accidents which represents a real

lose

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of

money

and time.

On the other hand

,

this

fashionable kind of shopping has a lot of edges and

benifits

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benefits

benefit

.

Firstly

, most products displayed online are cheaper than its counterpart at shopping

centers

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, because the retail companies would save a large amount of

money

that

otherwise

would have been paid for the

renatls

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rentals

rental

, hydro, and the

employees

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wages. And

airplain

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aeroplane

tickests

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tickets

are a prominent example of

such

price

differencies

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differences

, where booking an online trip is far less expensive than

to book

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it in person by 30% at the minimum.

Secondly

, it is clearly noticed recently that many goods are available on the trading company's website and missing in the retailing shop ,

thus

the consumer can order them online only.

Finally

, people

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special physical needs find it extremely more convenient and safe to get their daily groceries and

paying

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their bills through

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easy to use

websits'

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websites

rather

tahn

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than

to be exposed to

on

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rout hazards. To sum up,

although

online shopping has the cons of being risky in terms of product's quality

uncertainity

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uncertainty

and online transaction security, the advantages of getting

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cheaper stuff and

to save

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money

are largely

outweight

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outweigh

outweighed

those drawbacks. And I reckon that in

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period of time the majority of

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the consumer

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consumer

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consumers

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will shift to online shopping.