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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this agreement?

#people #choices #agreement
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In recent decades, global trade in various industries has launched
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 that are always more than one brand for choosing. Unquestionably, some consumers believe that they have too many options for purchasing. I agree with
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 viewpoint.
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 essay will discuss two benefits from having many
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 to buy; consumers can compare to get the best value, and traders continuously compete to improve their
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 to serve customers' needs for
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 share, described with the supporting reasons in the following paragraphs. Nowadays, purchasing channels, both goods and service solutions, are no longer limited to physical shopping.
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, people can happily access e-commerce channels and find a million
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 on the online markets without seeing the physical one before.
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, they can immediately compare,
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, quality, pricing, colour and size, delivery time and fee between sellers to get the best value
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 with reasonable prices.
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,
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 are provided more than once to
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. Traders continuously provide a great product to
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,
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, improve packaging, services and launch new
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 to beat the
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.
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, the benefit directly comes to customers who can have a variety of goods and services for
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 and compare the best one before purchasing. In conclusion, having many
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 for customers'
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 would get benefits more than drawbacks. Buyers will get the
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 with the best value for them by comparing each brand. In terms of manufacturers or providers, they would improve and innovate their
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 or services in a better way to serve and be the biggest
market
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 shared.
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