Children today spend a lot of time on social media. What potential problems could it cause and how would they be addressed?

Technology

have

Change the verb form

has

show examples

been improving tremendously since after

invenyion

Correct your spelling

invention

of

technolog

Correct your spelling

technology

. Countless people are addicted to using the internet in various methods, nowadays social

media

is the

quiel

Correct your spelling

quiet

popular among the

prettens

Correct your spelling

preteens

patterns

and they are

an

Change the article

apply

show examples

enormously obsessed

to

Change preposition

with

show examples

spending a

lot

Add the preposition

oflot

show examples

time on social

media

.

This

essay

Correct your spelling

discusses

show examples

discuses

Correct your spelling

discusses

show examples

what are the problems are related to

this

issue. There are more troubles to spending on social

media

who children. One of the major

problem

Change to a plural noun

problems

show examples

is

this

can

leads

Wrong verb form

lead

show examples

to being addicted

of

Change preposition

to

show examples

using an enormous period,

as a result

, it will be brought many health issues

such

as losing

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

eye sight

Correct your spelling

eyesight

show examples

, anxiety, depression and some mental disorder. Another

troubles

Replace the adjective

trouble

show examples

is that the children cannot give more attention

on

Change preposition

to

show examples

their

academic

Fix the agreement mistake

academics

show examples

when they are

spnding

Correct your spelling

spending

sending

a plethora of

period

Fix the agreement mistake

periods

show examples

on social

media

,

thus

, their academic exam

result

Fix the agreement mistake

results

show examples

would be affected by

this

.

For example

, the Times of India survey said that

schoolboy

Fix the agreement mistake

schoolboys

show examples

who spent more time on

socila

Correct your spelling

social

media

,

their

Replace the word

there

show examples

have gotten a low score in their final exams. These are the troubles are related to spending a plethora of

period

Fix the agreement mistake

periods

show examples

on social

media

. There are some effective

action

Fix the agreement mistake

actions

show examples

can

Correct pronoun usage

that can

show examples

be addressing

this

issue. One of the possible

solution

Change to a plural noun

solutions

show examples

is that the authority should be implemented a new law about the age limit of using social

media

.

For instance

, if a child

being

Wrong verb form

is

show examples

under 18, he cannot open

any

Correct your spelling

an

show examples

account

in

Change preposition

on

show examples

social

media

untill

Correct your spelling

until

turn 18.

This

can be worked for

childring

Correct your spelling

children

spending more hours on

this

platform. Another

manageble

Correct your spelling

manageable

action is that the parents should be created more outdoor games activities,

education related

Add a hyphen

education-related

show examples

audios and videos, conducting some puzzle word games between their's preteens.

Hence

,

this

active measure will be used to

addressing

Wrong verb form

address

show examples

this

issue. To conclude, certainly, the technology gives a lot of benefits

among

Change preposition

to

show examples

the society, even though,

this

can affect to the children's health and their's education too. A new law and creating

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

cognitive development activities can be addressed

this

problem. In my opinion, about

this

, these are the actions

can

Correct pronoun usage

that can

show examples

be solved

this

trouble. I hope the fathers and mothers should be monitored to their buds often in order to

avoiding

Change the verb

avoid

show examples

adverse

effect

Fix the agreement mistake

effects

show examples

.