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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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globalization creates abundant opportunities for the nation to select only the best thing which is suitable for them.
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, some individuals argue that there are too many
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. Overcoming health problems and the main two supporting reasons why
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 essay totally disagree with the latter idea. It cannot be denied that there are many people who
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 from food allegations around the world. They have to face
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their health issues
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 young age and develop
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severe ailments in some cases due to lacking
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nutrition.
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,in the past decade, the children who were allergic to cow's milk tended to have an insufficient calcium level in their body because only one type of milk was offered but nowadays when
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more
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 of foods are provided, they can select the
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 milk which contains calcium
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.
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, they become healthier and their height reaches the standard measurement of the children
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 the same age.
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,the more
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 of healthy foods, the more opportunities for people to overcome the diseases.
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 will help them have a healthy lifestyle.
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, without several ways of transportation, it is impossible for people to achieve their own assignments. To illustrate, if their goal is to reach the destination as quickly as possible, they can choose to travel by plane which is the fastest way of transportation.
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, when the purpose is to save the cost,
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 by train will be the better choice.
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 means that the variety of transportation can support different tasks.
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, who can deny the benefits of having several
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 in life
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 In conclusion, the more given approaches in
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 achieve their individual goals. In my perspective, I disagree with
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 idea without hesitation.
Submitted by Varaiphand on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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