Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the modern world,
the
globalization creates abundant opportunities for the nation to select only the best thing which is suitable for them. Correct article usage
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However
, some individuals argue that there are too many options
. Overcoming health problems and the main two supporting reasons why this
essay totally disagree with the latter idea.
It cannot be denied that there are many people who suffering
from food allegations around the world. They have to face Change the form of the verb
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their health issues Change preposition
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severe ailments in some cases due to lacking Change preposition
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For example
,in the past decade, the children who were allergic to cow's milk tended to have an insufficient calcium level in their body because only one type of milk was offered but nowadays when the
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options
of foods are provided, they can select the plant based
milk which contains calcium Add a hyphen
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As a result
, they become healthier and their height reaches the standard measurement of the children in
the same age. Change preposition
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Therefore
,the more options
of healthy foods, the more opportunities for people to overcome the diseases. This
will help them have a healthy lifestyle.
Moreover
, without several ways of transportation, it is impossible for people to achieve their own assignments. To illustrate, if their goal is to reach the destination as quickly as possible, they can choose to travel by plane which is the fastest way of transportation. On the other hand
, when the purpose is to save the cost, traveling
by train will be the better choice. Change the spelling
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This
means that the variety of transportation can support different tasks. Therefore
, who can deny the benefits of having several options
in life.
In conclusion, the more given approaches in Change the punctuation
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this
society can help mankind not only solve the health issues but also
achieve their individual goals. In my perspective, I disagree with this
idea without hesitation.Submitted by Varaiphand on
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