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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

#people #technology #relationships #development
In the present,
technology
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affective
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 of society
such
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people
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 that
technology
 affects
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the
relationships
 of
people
, while others hold opposite views. After careful consideration, I think that
technology
 is a negative development in
people
relationships
.
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 nowadays has
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 called the ara of science and
technology
. During the covid-19, going outside is hard so
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online communication is
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important because it can easily
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contact other
people
. There are many platforms to share opinions
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 the internet. In learning, replacing online-class
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 learning in
classroom
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 is a
conveniece
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convenience
.
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, students can learn everywhere with the device and they can manage the time schedules to learn
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each day.
However
,
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technology
 causes to change the
people
 interaction because of
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 attention
people
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 around them. The number of
people
 interested
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 the
technology
 device
more
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 than the
people
 who are beside them.
For example
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 their mobile phone. It
seem
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 like that in the present
people
 interaction with family or friends in real life is less than
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 past. In my point of view, I believe that
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face-to-face can make
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relationships
 more than contact via the internet.
People
 can make new friends
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many platforms, it can use a fake picture profile. They do not know anything that they can believe.
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, the number of
people
 spent
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most of
time
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with
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playing
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game
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 or watching series more than interacting with
people
. In the conclusion, I strongly believe that many
people
 can make good
relationships
 without
technology
. The improvement less interaction with other
people
 is doing activities together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interact
  • Social media platforms
  • Networking
  • Instant messaging
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • Misunderstandings
  • Emotional context
  • Superficial connections
  • Deceptive identities
  • Privacy concerns
  • Social skills
  • Video calls
  • Online presence
  • Digital communication
  • Cyber relationships
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