Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requriement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

society claim that domestic waste's recycling is not common in the population, emphasizing that it should be required legal by governments. Some countries are demanded specific rules for domestic waste, while most of them don't have any certain approaches. In fact, whilst most European counties have to bury their organic garbage in their garden to dispose of and classify , in Turkey we don't have to do it and, because of the difference between these two governmental approaches our country is dirtier than them and we are not able to use these
wastes
as the recyclable source. The legal obligation is needed to make the community
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get used to recycling
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the house
wastes
. When individuals separate the
wastes
as which include plastics, glass and food
wastes
instead
of holding them mixed, will save energy which is used for separation.
Besides
, the population who have houses with gardens can feed their soil by burying them. When acting like that, parents will be good examples for their children about how should save the environment,
also
. Another benefit of the governmental law’s about recycling house’s stuff is that to keep
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nature clean. In fact, keeping it clean is a rather simple and cheap way than
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trying to dirtiness. According to a specific article in social psychology people who walk in a clean street that doesn’t have any garbage feel that they are not allowed to throw away things;
however
, individuals who walk in dirty streets take throwing their garbage to the streets normal. To obligate recycling of house
wastes
is essential for society and the world since people still need to learn and understand how and why recycling is vital for us. During
this
learning period using governmental obligation will effect positively speed of the learning process and save the environment.
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