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It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries. To what extend you agree or disagree?

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In an era of globalization, where all
nations
 are facing challenges related to business competition, climatic changes resulting in global warming and other natural calamities, many people believe, that during any
such
 events
countries
 should help natives of their own country rather than helping individuals around the globe, as it is not possible to do so. I do not agree
to
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this
 statement and I will justify the same in
this
 essay.
Firstly
, if all the
nations
 start thinking in
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 above-said manner, the world will be left without humanity. As there are many
countries
 in Africa, who struggles most of the years through food and medical crises, due to natural disasters like drought and earthquakes. To support these underdeveloped
nations
, organizations like
" World
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 Health Organization" and UNICEF are formed, which is funded and run by representatives from different
countries
.
Secondly
, developed
countries
 like Japan, America, Russia etc.
they
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offer various scholarships for study programs to poor nation's citizens. Not only educational support but,
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also
 provide job opportunities by providing them Visa to students with talent.
In addition
, wealthier
countries
 provide funds to developing
nations
 for their development. For an instance, International Monetary Fund has given loans to many Asian
countries
 for infrastructure development.
However
, some peoples have contrary views on the said statement, as they believe that helping native people is important rather than supporting all individuals around the globe. They trust, that before helping others, every need of the citizen of a nation should be addressed
first
. To conclude, to make a world a better place to live in and support humanity, sharing things and knowledge with other peoples and
nations
 will go a long way in promoting peace and harmony around the globe.
Submitted by saurab.choursasia on

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