You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your boss about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to take time off work and how long you need explain how you will keep up-to-date while you are away suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Bond, I am writing to request permission to take some leave during the coming two months beginning 21st of May. As you probably recall my father has recently had some issues regarding his health condition and, unfortunately, our local medical specialists could not provide him with proper aid due to the lack of equipment. Afterwards, we were advised to travel to Israel in order to get essential therapy.

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year my father is nearly seventy and he cannot travel or stay there on his own.

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, I must assist him for approximately two months. During my absence, I will keep in touch with my assistance Kate by phone and corporate email. Kate is aware of the situation and she knows my personal number, if there are some force majeure circumstances, I will be informed immediately.

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, we have an intern from France, whose name is Anna, who can substitute me while I am away. Anna has been doing an internship for half of a year under my supervision for seven months and I guarantee her. Thank you kindly for considering my request. Yours sincerely, Angel Smith

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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