Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?
Different studies say that when inmates go out of jail, they again do some crimes.
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Firstly
, some think that criminals
that go out of prison commit crimes again because the
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life
in jail is really different to real life
and the inmates spent a lot of time
without doing anything. Also
, world life
can change while time
runs for the prisoners. Furthermore
, governments do not invest money in creating different programs to change the mind of criminals
. For instance
, in Chile
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this
can be influenced by the bad politics that we have.
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, with regards to the main problem, governments can create a different job into
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this
can be positive for criminals
because they could spend time
learning some work as consequently
when people get out the jail they could reintegrate to
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For instance
, a good job or activity that prisoners may do is ending their scholarship or learning to work with wood.
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prisoners
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