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the number of academic staff members by gender across the faculties of a major university in 2012.

The given bar chart illustrates the information about the number of academic
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 members by gender across the faculties of a major university in 2012. The general overview here is that the most male
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 was work at Engineering
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, while Education
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 had the majority of female
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. According to the bar chart, it can be seen that Engineering
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 was the most popular
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 for men cadre,accounting for over 80% work in, whereas women cadre indicated a mere under 20%. Roughly 60% of male cadre worked at Law
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 which was a gradually more than female who worked only 40%.
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, the Business
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 and Science
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 shared a similar figure for crew members which accounted for over 60% of the men crew and under 40% of the women
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.
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, the number of female crew was higher than male
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 in Education
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( approximately almost 80% and just over 20% respectively).
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, women and men shared a similar amount of their members in the medical
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, with the figure approximately over 40% in each.

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