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the average number of the values and source of fish imported to The USA from 1988 to 2000.

The given bar chart and pie charts illustrate the information about the average number of the values and
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 of
fish
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 imported to The USA from 1988 to 2000. The general overview here is that the most total value was in 2000, and in 1988
Canada
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 was the highest exported
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 of
fish
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 to The USA, While The majority of
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 of
fish
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 was exported by the other countries to The US in 1992 and 2000. According to the bar chart, it can be seen that. An increase was seen in the figure for the values over the period. In 1988. It indicated only 6.57 billion dollars, after passing four years,
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 number rose a sightless to 8.52 billion dollars.
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, its number reached 10.72 billion dollars in 2000. Turning to the pic charts, it is clear that the highest total of a
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 of
fish
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 was exported by
Canada
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, accounting for 60% compared to the other countries and
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 at 27% and 23% respectively.four years later, there was a significant movement. The figure of
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 dropped dramatically to 34%, whereas the other countries and
China
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 experienced an upward trend, in the other national rising to roughly 26% and in
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 increased to 20%.
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, the figure for
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 and The other National fell a minimally to 28% and 42% respectively in 2000,
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, the proportion of
China
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 rose a gradually to 30% at the same period.

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