You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

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Dear Daxu Aunt, I am writing

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letter to let you know that

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am going to visit your city Mumbai.

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, I got a month leave from my busy schedule and

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time

instead

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of travelling

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abroad

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am going to visit one of my dream

city

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. I am gonna come there

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week and stay there for two weeks. I know it is not enough to explore the whole city.

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, I will be going to Tamil Nadu after that. I was wondering if

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can stay at your place as you and Uncle are only living in your house so

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it wont

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wont

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a trouble for you. I am willing to pay my living expenses in order to lessen your burden as

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know you lost your job during

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Covid situation. Please let me know as soon as you receive

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letter so I can arrange my stay elsewhere if you can't. I cant wait to see you both. Take care. With love,

Brijal

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Bridal

Brinjal

brijal_desaiSat Nov 06 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

anticipate
accommodation
arrive/depart
duration
itinerary
gracious hospitality
household
inconvenience
lodging
reimburse
temporary residence
travel arrangements
visit
warm welcome

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