You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?
#minutes #topic #devices #dishwashers #communication #tools #computers #lives #people #technology #stress
Modern technology has made our lives easier with electronic gadgets
such
as dishwashing and communication has become easy to reach to people
. A number of people
believe that using electronic equipments
has Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
adverse
Add an article
an adverse
affect
on Replace the word
effect
people
's lives because it has lessen
one's physical activity and Change the verb form
lessened
telephone
and television's excessive usage has made them isolated from the world. Correct article usage
the telephone
However
, I think using modern tools wisely will only give advantges
.
Earlier, Correct your spelling
advantages
poeple
used to wash dishes themselves or used to pay Correct your spelling
people
labor
for the same. Due to fact that Change the spelling
labour
invention
of washing utensils or Correct article usage
the invention
cloths
has made it easier. Not just that but communication has become very easy and you can call or even see them on video from your home. Correct your spelling
clothes
However
, many people
are not happy about this
modern technology and think that this
is curse
rather than Add an article
a curse
the
blessing. Correct article usage
a
For example
, washing dishes or cloth by yourself is much better than the machine, as machine
will not clean it as one person Add an article
the machine
ccan
do it. Aged Correct your spelling
can
people
believe that,
Remove the comma
apply
young
generation is living in their own world with Add an article
the young
a young
the
electronic devices Correct article usage
apply
such
as phones and computers. New
generation has Add an article
A new
The new
forget
to spend quality time with their family. Though life is conveniently easy with the use of new technology Change the verb form
forgotten
but
it diminished the quality of life.
Remove the conjunction
apply
On the other hand
, people
are way more positive about the gadgets as they do not have to worry about the maid has come or not and can do it
house chores as per their free time. Correct pronoun usage
their
Study
is more convenient for kids with the use of computers. Add an article
The study
For instance
, for any school activity, you can google and you will find plenty of articles for one topic. Eventhough
, kids are indulged in Correct your spelling
Even though
phone
most of the time, with the proper usage, they can learn so many things Fix the agreement mistake
phones
such
as there are applications to learn mathematics online.
In conclusion, although
there are cons of
using modern devices, advantages weigh more than that. So it is not that Change preposition
to
stressfull
as Correct your spelling
stressful
people
think that are
.Change the verb form
is
Submitted by brijal_desai on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?