You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?

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Modern technology has made our lives easier with electronic gadgets

such

as dishwashing and communication has become easy to reach to

people

. A number of

people

believe that using electronic

equipments

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equipment

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has

adverse

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an adverse

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affect

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effect

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people

's lives because it has

lessen

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lessened

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one's physical activity and

telephone

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the telephone

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and television's excessive usage has made them isolated from the world.

However

, I think using modern tools wisely will only give

advantges

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advantages

. Earlier,

poeple

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people

used to wash dishes themselves or used to pay

labor

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labour

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for the same. Due to fact that

invention

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the invention

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of washing utensils or

cloths

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clothes

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has made it easier. Not just that but communication has become very easy and you can call or even see them on video from your home.

However

, many

people

are not happy about

this

modern technology and think that

this

curse

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a curse

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rather than

the

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blessing.

For example

, washing dishes or cloth by yourself is much better than the machine, as

machine

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the machine

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will not clean it as one person

ccan

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can

do it. Aged

people

believe that

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apply

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young

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the young

a young

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generation is living in their own world with

the

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apply

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electronic devices

such

as phones and computers.

New

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A new

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generation has

forget

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forgotten

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to spend quality time with their family. Though life is conveniently easy with the use of new technology

but

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it diminished the quality of life.

On the other hand

people

are way more positive about the gadgets as they do not have to worry about the maid has come or not and can do

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their

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house chores as per their free time.

Study

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The study

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is more convenient for kids with the use of computers.

For instance

, for any school activity, you can google and you will find plenty of articles for one topic.

Eventhough

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Even though

, kids are indulged in

phone

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phones

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most of the time, with the proper usage, they can learn so many things

such

as there are applications to learn mathematics online. In conclusion,

although

there are cons

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using modern devices, advantages weigh more than that. So it is not that

stressfull

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stressful

people

think that

are

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Your opinion

Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

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