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Test and examinations are a central feature of school system in many countries. Do you think educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

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These days, most schools across the world use the
exam
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indicator to evaluate the
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 potential of each
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. It is
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 topic whether the tests in schooling have more advantages for
students
 compared to
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disadvatages
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disadvantages
disadvantage
, or not. In
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 will be elaborated in detail before my opinion will be reached.
First
 of all, the examination is able to encourage
students
 to focus on the curriculum, and study seriously. Without the test, children will not realize the importance of the
subjects
 as they are too younger to know which knowledges are necessary for them in the future. Based on my experience, I prepared for the
subjects
, which do not have the
exam
 for a day, while I read the books for a week to prepare for the classes that have the exams.
Therefore
, they are considered as the incentive for
students
 to read more books. The
second
 reason to support the view is being
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 indicator. In order to evaluate the
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 ability of particular individuals, the score from the
exam
 is
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 effective tool.
Hence
, after
students
 know
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themselves
 from the result of the test, they can improve
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themselves
 by studying more about the
subjects
 that get
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.
Moreover
, they
also
 know which
cirriculums
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curriculums
curriculum
 they are good at, which they can continue the higher education related to that
subjects
.
For example
, from the score in my
exam
 at the high school, I
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 that I was special
at
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 Biology and Chemistry.
Therefore
, I decided to study in the field of agriculture and farm management, which most of
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subjects
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my favourite class. In conclusion, according to the benefits mentioned previously including studying encouragement, and effective
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 for
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students performance
student performance
, I strongly agree with
this
 statement as their pros are outnumbered their cons.
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