The digital age has made the gap between the younger and older generations wider. Give reasons for your own answer.
The introduction of new technology in terms of digital life has created a vast distance between the young
generation
and older
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the older
generation
. The young ones
are more attractive
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attracted
towards
the gadgets available in Change preposition
to
a
market and occupied in using different Correct article usage
the
apps
whereas elder people
are not familiar with the
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apply
such
kinds of technology. This
essay will discuss the reasons behind the generation
gap.
To begin
with, these days increase in the development of new electronic products draw the attention of younger people
due to which little ones
get more advanced as compared to older ones
. Apart from this
, the
internet usage is very easy for Correct article usage
apply
young
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the young
generation
whereas elder people
are not so much able to access the internet. Moreover
, the gadgets available are of
so much tricky to use that older Change preposition
apply
generation
people
are not able to handle, and so they remain somewhere unfamiliar with the use. For example
, new product launch
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launches
such
as mobile phones are
not so easily be used by elders as Change the verb form
is
it
required Correct pronoun usage
they
password
and many Fix the agreement mistake
passwords
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other
others
details Correct pronoun usage
other
such
as gmails or emails which are not easy for them.
On the other side, there also
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are also
apps
in which young people
are often busy in
either making videos or playing games. Change preposition
apply
In addition
to this
, young ones
are occupied in doing necessary activities which are not accessible by older ones
. Moreover
, older
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the older
generation
do
not know how to use these Change the verb form
does
apps
as well as they even
not aware Add a missing verb
are even
with
the outcome of involving in Change preposition
of
such
activities. For instance
, some apps
are introduced in which young
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the young
generation
makes videos in order to get popularity and posting on social site
while doing Fix the agreement mistake
sites
such
activities they shun attention on their elders.
To sum up, young
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the young
a young
generation
is involved in the new gadgets available in a
market and indulge in Correct article usage
the
apps
available instead
of making healthy conversation with elder people
because of this
the generation
gap is created as they are not familiar with the
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apply
such
technology.Submitted by ka261991 on
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