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The digital age has made the gap between the younger and older generations wider. Give reasons for your own answer.

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The introduction of new technology in terms of digital life has created a vast distance between the young
generation
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 and
older
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the older
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generation
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. The young
ones
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 are more
attractive
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towards
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to
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 the gadgets available in
a
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the
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 market and occupied in using different
apps
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 whereas elder
people
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 are not familiar with
the
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such
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 kinds of technology.
This
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generation
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 gap.
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 with, these days increase in the development of new electronic products draw the attention of younger
people
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 due to which little
ones
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 get more advanced as compared to older
ones
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. Apart from
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internet usage is very easy for
young
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the young
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generation
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 whereas elder
people
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 are not so much able to access the internet.
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, the gadgets available are
of
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so much tricky to use that older
generation
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people
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 are not able to handle, and so they remain somewhere unfamiliar with the use.
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, new product
launch
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launches
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such
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 as mobile phones
are
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 not so easily be used by elders as
it
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they
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 required
password
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passwords
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 and many
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other
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others
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other
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 details
such
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 as gmails or emails which are not easy for them. On the other side, there
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also
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are also
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apps
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 in which young
people
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 are often busy
in
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either making videos or playing games.
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 to
this
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, young
ones
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 are occupied in doing necessary activities which are not accessible by older
ones
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.
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,
older
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the older
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generation
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do
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 not know how to use these
apps
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 as well as they
even
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are even
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 not aware
with
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of
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 the outcome of involving in
such
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, some
apps
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 are introduced in which
young
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the young
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generation
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 makes videos in order to get popularity and posting on social
site
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sites
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 while doing
such
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 activities they shun attention on their elders. To sum up,
young
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the young
a young
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generation
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 is involved in the new gadgets available in
a
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the
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 market and indulge in
apps
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 available
instead
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 of making healthy conversation with elder
people
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 because of
this
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 the
generation
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 gap is created as they are not familiar with
the
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such
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 technology.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital age
  • gap
  • younger generation
  • older generation
  • technological advancements
  • rapid pace of change
  • overwhelming
  • adept
  • digital devices
  • communicate
  • interact
  • resistant
  • knowledge
  • skills
  • reliance
  • divide
  • attitudes
  • privacy
  • online security
  • widening
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