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Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet.As a result we cannot trust information we read there.To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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In our modern world, many people are enabled to have Internet access that provides them with an opportunity to post any news without confirming it
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. I certainly agree that
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 innovation has only negative features and let me explain my opinion. 
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 it has become quite trendy to make diverse videos and to be a blogger. Some individuals are desperate for drawing attention, and they do not despise posting fake
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 in order to create hype around them. It is obvious media applications namely WhatsApp, Facebook, Twitter are being installed and used by numerous amount of people around the globe.
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, imagine, if one ubiquitous blogger decides to post any falsified news on their page of any above-mentioned apps, it will easily go viral by their followers since humans are used to sharing rumours.
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 that the COVID-19 vaccination negatively affects male's reproduction.
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, the number of vaccinated men sharply decreased due to the fear of not having potential children.
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, as countries are enhancing the business industry is
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 expanding so it leads to
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 of rivalry among companies.
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, potentially any company is able to leak a hoax story or
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 about their rivals to the public with the aid of a special organization. To illustrate, during
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Trump's run for president on the Internet appeared nasty stories of some women who claimed to be sexually harassed by the former president. Undoubtedly,
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 false report was monitored and cancelled from social media;
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, it had an adverse effect on his wife and children. In summary, certainly, the Internet is a major source of
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 where it can be conveyed instantly among users.
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, under no circumstances should readers deem the content they see online is precisely accurate.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Verification
  • Misinformation
  • Disinformation
  • Journalistic standards
  • Algorithm
  • Engagement
  • Source discernment
  • Anonymity
  • Traditional news outlets
  • AI and machine learning
  • Reliable sources
  • Unverified information
  • Amplification
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