Throughout history, people have dreamed about perfect society, but they have not agreed what an ideal society is. What do you think the most important elements to have perfect society in the modern world? How people can achieve an ideal society?

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ages, every single person has been inclined towards the concept

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perfect community.

However

,

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is

also

true that there have been many contradictory viewpoints on

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topic. I personally consider that

education

is the key element which can lead to

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perfect

society

and realistically,

people

can achieve

this

aim by right intention and individual efforts. Undoubtedly, receiving

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education

is the foundation of a good

society

. The foremost reason behind my thinking

this

is that formal

education

helps

people

to understand the value of relationships and uniformity by studying with children from all walks of life. The school atmosphere inculcates the sense of belongingness and care that leads to brotherhood and love within

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society

.

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society

an ideal one.

In addition

to that, by learning at school, the duties of a citizen,

people

are anticipated towards their responsibilities for

society

such

as keeping the environment clean. Those who realise the impact of

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on their life

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put extra effort in

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direction and make a place liveable for all. With regards to individual efforts,

people

can start from their

home

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. For

this

,they should,

for example

, save water.

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they should educate their children as well. By taking

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initiative,

people

can help in combating the devastating problem of water shortage in many areas.

Additionally

, those who have been gifted with good communication skills or developed leadership qualities

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should organise some sort of workshops and campaigns so as to motivate others for partaking in social activities

such

as plantation. By

this

,they can decelerate the detrimental impact of

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effect on climate. In conclusion, I would subscribe to the view that receiving value

education

is a boon and

this

is the core of an ideal

society

because only a group of literate

people

can construct and look after a perfect

society

.